Read my full review: http://bit.ly/150SPbBInitial thoughts...Excellent story with good writing, but it needed to be more polished. Frequent incidents of repetitiveness and moments when the book dragged on. I was noticing a large numbers of the "and thens". Writing needed to be tighter.I must admit that I did love the character development in this story (and I was particular to the "twistedness" of it. That type of book is right up my alley). This is definitely an author that I would look at other works, but obtain them through a print version. Special note: This book was horrible in formatting for an ebook. It made it very difficult and longer to get through. I took this into account with reviewing the book and did not hold it against it.